Precinct Zero, part two

[sigma7]

Note that in BrikWars, low die rolls are bad, and rolling a 1 generally constitutes a critical failure.

Comments

[former-callixte.livejournal.com]

These are great! Keep 'em coming!

[kateshort.livejournal.com]

One minor stylistic nitpick... I'm having trouble reading the narrative boxes. I'd suggest mostly yellow fading down into a bit of green, or maybe a switch to a pale blue. The green doesn't quite have enough contrast with the black text. I definitely prefer top-to-bottom color, btw, as opposed to the left-to-right coloring of the boxes in the second panel.

*snicker* at the knives guy.